Wednesday, April 13, 2016

2 stars and a wish



W.A.l.T. 2 stars and a wish.


Discussion. We have done a 2 stars and a wish. We usually we do on a Friday but we are doing it on Thursday because we have a fun day on Friday. 

Feedback feedford. 
This is a good post Jada. Very colourful and eye catching. Something you may want to work on would be giving more description in your explanations. I am proud of all your hard work. 
from Thomas






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W.A.L.T. To make a advertisement

Description. I made a poster about my downtown town cinemas. I had a special but it wasn't on every day it was only on in the weekend it was pretty cheap.


Feedback you done a good job of your post.
 feedford. There is nothing wrong with this post nice work Jada. Poppy.





Tuesday, April 12, 2016

Sunday market

W.A.L.T. create a magazine cover 

Description. This is our plan about Sunday market. We are making a magazine cover about the book Sunday market.

Feedback feedford. The picture is really clear but the in the description you could of ecsplained more. Kate😘 . 




Thursday, April 7, 2016

2 stars and a wish

W.a.l.t. 2 stars and a wish.

Description. Every Friday we do a 2 stars and a wish. It is fun. I think I improve every Friday. 

Feedback I think you could add more in your spelling . Feedforward love it , really like the beautiful colours.